Is this a good story so far?- I'm adding more?

Well, let me start by saying you have a good start. The problem I see is that the climax and rising action nearly start at the beginning. So i'm trying to say thing happen to quickly. You have a good idea I love the names you chose and the idea you have. I think you should add more to the start. Like maybe the day before and they hear some soft nosies in the basement but in there rooms she hears a loud one. So far it's good but need tweaking.-Good Luck! <3